They have one hope.
One hope lies within certain people.
Those people were blessed by The Entity.
The Entity that dwells in within The Ultraverse.
A Sci Fi Miniseries in three parts…
Plotline
First off we see a battered Firearm, walking away from a complex as it explodes. He calls, and tells his employers he's done with the business. He is holding a high tech gun in his hand, and walks off, leaving the Walkie in the ground. A darkened figure to the side nods to Firearm, telling him that they wanted him to die along with the Ultras. Behind them, a spot on the moon glows bright, and this triggers the opening credits.
YEARS LATER
Begins with Hardcase and the rest of the Squad, fighting off villains, dastardly villains. One of the Squad notices a bomb in the building, it explodes, and Hardcase is the last one. This is actually a TV program, and Kevin is watching it. He runs outside, and goes to school.
I really like this.
I'm not clear as to whether this is meant to be archival footage of Hardcase's days with the Squad, or Hardcase being in a TV program that fictionalizes his adventures with the Squad (which is kind of perverse and tasteless, but heh heh heh). Either way, it's a fast way of introducing the character while seamlessly cutting to Kevin.
Ultimate Houde said:
A mercenary is seen, hiding behind a building, watching Kevin go to school. He pulls out a list, and smiles at it. He mentions this one will be easy, and follows Kevin. At school Kevin is going into the bathroom when Firearm pulls him aside. He has a worried look to his face, and keeps telling Kevin he needs to leave with him. He was hired by an outside source to find Kevin, and get him out of the school and to safety. They go down a corridor, when Rafferty, the merc from before, is there, smiling. He pulls out a gun, and Firearm pulls out his pistol, to which they begin to have a gunfight in the hallway. Firearm manages to escape with Kevin through a hole in the school wall, Rafferty being knocked out.
I'm getting this vibe of your Firearm being a little bit like a British Jack Bauer --- all harsh tones and impatient muttering --- and that's not a bad thing.
I like how you introduce Rafferty right off the bat. It's one thing to keep the villain all mysterious or working in the shadows or limited to fringe scenes before he makes his Big Presence-Reeking Full Reveal, but it's a more novel and exciting thing for him to show up and go, "Here I am! What, you expect me to be subtle? I kill super-guys for a living!" Not to mention the fact that this approach plays to the strengths of both Paul Blackthrone --- I swear this actor's name sounds totally made-up --- AND the Rafferty character.
Ultimate Houde said:
This begins a trek for the first part of the miniseries, where Kevin learns the existence of super powered beings, and where he learns that he is one of them. Firearm explains that Rafferty is hired by an Edwin Mosley, a delusional Ultra who wants to kill all other Ultras on the planet. They will encounter Rafferty one more time, near the end of the mini, where he will be accompanied by Prototype, who is also working for Edwin.
I have this weird visual in my head of this entire part of the story being a road movie chapter --- long stretches of California highway and tacky tourist traps while Firearm tells his nigh-preposterous story. I'll admit I wasn't too hot on Chris Eccleston playing the character, but he totally works for this part of the story, methinks.
As for Prototype, I'm a little uncertain as to how Firearm punks his ***, but I guess we can't expect you to give a perfect blow-by-blow synopsis, eh? Whatever, you keep the ball going and you can fudge the details of what's not really important.
Ultimate Houde said:
Once they survive this encounter, they meet Firearm's employer, Hardcase. Hardcase explains that after watching his entire team die in a blast years ago, he had saved Firearm from the same fate, and together they have been saving other Ultras from the grasp of Edwin. At the end of this explanation, Kevin realizes he truly wants to be a hero, and transforms, into Prime.
OMG. This is awesome.
At first, I wasn't keen on not seeing Prime in this chapter --- as I tend to view the character as "Underneath this protoplasmic body lies a scared and totally idiotic thirteen year old" and therefore the appeal is to strip him from Prime to Kevin rather than for Kevin to explode into Prime.
But this is great, also because you push Hardcase to the fore by making him less of the anxiety-riddled whiny Tom Cruise he's portrayed as and more of the do-gooder actor stereotype. (I'm thinking George Clooney in a blonde ponytail now).
We also chop out any unnecessary melodramatic mystery about Prime. They know he's a kid and they have to deal with that whether they like it or not. Besides the only time the kid/adult dichotomy really mattered was when Kevin was being molested by pedophiles while hitch-hiking and trying to hit on his high school crush and looking like a perv doing it in his ultra-adult form --- and between here and the last chapter, there's no room for that.
I also hope this ends with everyone saying, "Gross." or at least the line, "Can we all agree that's absolutely disgusting?"
Comments to follow for Part 2 and 3 after I eat dinner. Back in an hour.