Ice
Teh Sexy Monkey Queen
I can help with covers. I did a guest cover, and also did the UC: TF Annual cover. Just supply the images you want, and I'll take care of the rest.Dr.Strangefate said:
Ultimate Central: The Fanfic Volume 4
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Dr.Strangefate
He Sees You When You're Sleeping. He Knows When Yo
Sounds good...
But... Moony hasn't signed in since the 4th...
Should we be worried?
But... Moony hasn't signed in since the 4th...
Should we be worried?
Ice
Teh Sexy Monkey Queen
I'm a little worried to be honest. Hope everything's ok.Dr.Strangefate said:
Dr.Strangefate
He Sees You When You're Sleeping. He Knows When Yo
Does anyone talk to him outside of the forum?
Like, at all?
Like, at all?
moonmaster
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My computer broke. And I had no other internet access. But atleast the delay added to the hype.
Now, in a few minutes you will all be MOONED.
(Btw, the issue is actually too long and will have to be posted in 2 or 3 consecutive posts.)
HERE IT COMES!
But atleast the delay added to the hype. Now, in a few minutes you will all be MOONED.
(Btw, the issue is actually too long and will have to be posted in 2 or 3 consecutive posts.)
HERE IT COMES!
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ULTIMATE CENTRAL: THE FANFIC VOL.4 #28
"ENIGMA"
BY: Moonmaster
ACT 1
1:00 AM
Nigma sat in front of his computer. He was bored out of his mind. He went to his favorite site, Ultimate Central, but no one was on and no one had posted in hours. He yawned gently and suddenly realized how tired he was. His eyes slowly closed themselves and his head fell to his desk.
His eyes opened suddenly and he groggily lifted his head and looked at the clock. He had slept for an hour. He looked up and realized that his computer screen had gone totally black.
NIGMA: Oh, what the...
A message typed itself across his screen.
HELLO, NIGMA
NIGMA: WHAT? WHO ARE YOU? DID YOU DO SOMETHING TO MY COMPUTER?
RELAX. I'M JUST A FRIEND WHO'D LIKE A WORD WITH YOU.
NIGMA: OH, I SEE WHAT'S GOING ON. LISTEN "TRIXIE69", I ALREADY TOLD YOU: I KNOW YOU'RE SOME 40 YEAR OLD DUDE, SO DON'T TRY TO TELL ME THAT YOU'RE "BARELY LEGAL AND WANT TO SHOW ME YOUR HOT ***!".
I'M NOT SOME CYBER PERV, NIGMA. I'M JUST HERE TO SHOW YOU THE TRUTH.
NIGMA: LET ME GUESS, "THE TRUTH ABOUT PENIS ENLARGEMENT!".
NO! IT'S ABOUT ULTIMATE CENTRAL.
NIGMA: WHAT ABOUT ULTIMATE CENTAL?
YOU'VE SEEN THE NEWS. THE INCREDIBLE EVENTS THAT HAVE HAPPENED. THE TRUTH IS THAT EVERY MEMBER OF ULTIMATE CENTRAL IS GETTING POWERS.
WHY AREN'T YOU?
NIGMA: I DON'T KNOW. I GUESS I HAVEN'T BEEN CHOSEN YET.
THE SITE DOESN'T "CHOOSE" ANYONE. THOSE BASTARDS ARE HORDING ITS POWERS! BUT I COULD GRANT YOU POWER.
NIGMA: POWER?
AND REVENGE
NIGMA: WHO ARE YOU?
A FRIEND. NOW BRACE YOURSELF.
Nigma sat back in his chair.
NIGMA: Brace for wha-
A blinding light his his eyes and his ears were filled with sound. His body convulsed violently. When he opened his eyes, his house had been reduced to rubble and he felt ... different. He noticed a particularly bright star in the sky and felt an odd urge to go there. Before he knew it, he was rocketing into the heavens.
THE ULTIMATE CENTRAL MANSION:
Cyberspace Home of the World's Greatest Heroes, the Avatars
THEMANWITHOUTFEAR: Nigma? Where is he?
ICEMASTERTRON: Close. He's causing a lot of damage, too.
EROZ: Ice, scan the news networks. See if you can find any footage.
ICEMASTERTRON: Yes Sir!
EROZ: Shut up.
News footage splashed across one of the monitors above one of UC's computers.
DIRISHB: I must be high, cuz I don't see anything.
ICEMASTERTRON: I'm absolutely sure you are high, but I don't see anything either.
MWOF: He's moving very fast.
EROZ: Stop the footage there, Ice.
Eroz tapped on a blurry, silver streak that was shooting across the screen.
NURHACHI: So we know he's fast.
MWOF: And very powerful.
DIRISHB: And he's wrecking everything. But why?
EROZ: I don't know...
DIRISHB: Well, I say we go down and have a talk with him, shall we gentlemen?
ICEMASTERTRON: Ya know, I've got a bad feeling about this.
DIRISHB: Oh, you've got a bad feeling about everything, Grandma.
EROZ: You guys go without me. With the Cabinet running around, this place may not be as safe as we think.
DIRISHB: Aye, aye Captain!
EROZ: I hate you guys.
"ENIGMA"
BY: Moonmaster
ACT 1
1:00 AM
Nigma sat in front of his computer. He was bored out of his mind. He went to his favorite site, Ultimate Central, but no one was on and no one had posted in hours. He yawned gently and suddenly realized how tired he was. His eyes slowly closed themselves and his head fell to his desk.
His eyes opened suddenly and he groggily lifted his head and looked at the clock. He had slept for an hour. He looked up and realized that his computer screen had gone totally black.
NIGMA: Oh, what the...
A message typed itself across his screen.
HELLO, NIGMA
NIGMA: WHAT? WHO ARE YOU? DID YOU DO SOMETHING TO MY COMPUTER?
RELAX. I'M JUST A FRIEND WHO'D LIKE A WORD WITH YOU.
NIGMA: OH, I SEE WHAT'S GOING ON. LISTEN "TRIXIE69", I ALREADY TOLD YOU: I KNOW YOU'RE SOME 40 YEAR OLD DUDE, SO DON'T TRY TO TELL ME THAT YOU'RE "BARELY LEGAL AND WANT TO SHOW ME YOUR HOT ***!".
I'M NOT SOME CYBER PERV, NIGMA. I'M JUST HERE TO SHOW YOU THE TRUTH.
NIGMA: LET ME GUESS, "THE TRUTH ABOUT PENIS ENLARGEMENT!".
NO! IT'S ABOUT ULTIMATE CENTRAL.
NIGMA: WHAT ABOUT ULTIMATE CENTAL?
YOU'VE SEEN THE NEWS. THE INCREDIBLE EVENTS THAT HAVE HAPPENED. THE TRUTH IS THAT EVERY MEMBER OF ULTIMATE CENTRAL IS GETTING POWERS.
WHY AREN'T YOU?
NIGMA: I DON'T KNOW. I GUESS I HAVEN'T BEEN CHOSEN YET.
THE SITE DOESN'T "CHOOSE" ANYONE. THOSE BASTARDS ARE HORDING ITS POWERS! BUT I COULD GRANT YOU POWER.
NIGMA: POWER?
AND REVENGE
NIGMA: WHO ARE YOU?
A FRIEND. NOW BRACE YOURSELF.
Nigma sat back in his chair.
NIGMA: Brace for wha-
A blinding light his his eyes and his ears were filled with sound. His body convulsed violently. When he opened his eyes, his house had been reduced to rubble and he felt ... different. He noticed a particularly bright star in the sky and felt an odd urge to go there. Before he knew it, he was rocketing into the heavens.
THE ULTIMATE CENTRAL MANSION:
Cyberspace Home of the World's Greatest Heroes, the Avatars
THEMANWITHOUTFEAR: Nigma? Where is he?
ICEMASTERTRON: Close. He's causing a lot of damage, too.
EROZ: Ice, scan the news networks. See if you can find any footage.
ICEMASTERTRON: Yes Sir!
EROZ: Shut up.
News footage splashed across one of the monitors above one of UC's computers.
DIRISHB: I must be high, cuz I don't see anything.
ICEMASTERTRON: I'm absolutely sure you are high, but I don't see anything either.
MWOF: He's moving very fast.
EROZ: Stop the footage there, Ice.
Eroz tapped on a blurry, silver streak that was shooting across the screen.
NURHACHI: So we know he's fast.
MWOF: And very powerful.
DIRISHB: And he's wrecking everything. But why?
EROZ: I don't know...
DIRISHB: Well, I say we go down and have a talk with him, shall we gentlemen?
ICEMASTERTRON: Ya know, I've got a bad feeling about this.
DIRISHB: Oh, you've got a bad feeling about everything, Grandma.
EROZ: You guys go without me. With the Cabinet running around, this place may not be as safe as we think.
DIRISHB: Aye, aye Captain!
EROZ: I hate you guys.
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ACT 2
THE HEADQUARTERS OF THE CABINET:
NEMESES OF THE CABINET AND GENERAL EVILDOERS
Ultimate E thoughtfully stared at the television screen before him.
ULTIMATE E: So that's him, Nigma?
DR.STRANGEFATE: Yes, as far as we can discern.
ULTIMATE E: Well, obviously we'll be recruiting him.
DR.STRANGEFATE: Of course, I'll fetch the others-
ULTIMATE E: No, no. The Avatars will also be aiming for him. We must wait until they attack him. Then, once he has been soured against them, we will recruit him. That's the only intelligent plan, right Doctor?
DR.STRANGEFATE: ...Yes, Sir.
ULTIMATE E: And I've been meaning to tell you something.
DR.STRANGEFATE: What is it, Sir?
ULTIMATE E: Attempts at usurpation never end well.
DR.STRANGEFATE: What?
ULTIMATE E: You know exactly what I'm talking about.
E stared calmly at Dr. Strangefate until an anxious-looking Baxter came running into the room.
BAXTER: Sir, its the computers! There's some sort of transmission coming through. I don't know what it is. Its in some language I've never heard.
SHIHAD: It's Japanese!
Came a voice from the other room.
BAXTER: For the last time, jackass: it isn't Japanese!
ULTIMATE E: I will see for myself. And remember what I told you, Doctor.
Ultimate E left for the computer room.
BAXTER: And what exactly did he tell you?
DR.STRANGEFATE: Shouldn't you be licking E's boots clean or something?
OURCHAIR: Aw snap!
DR.STRANGEFATE: ...
BAXTER: ...
OURCHAIR: ...sorry.
BAXTER: You better start watching your back around here, Strangefate.
DR.STRANGEFATE: Well thanks for your advice. I'll do that.
Baxter glared at Strangefate for a second and stomped out of the room.
DR.STRANGEFATE: Dammit. They're on to us. We're going to lay low for a while. Very low.
Ultimate E sat in front of the computer. The screen was covered in static. Eventually, the vague features of a face could be made out.
ULTIMATE E: I know, I've seen it.
BOOMING VOICE: THEN YOU KNOW WHAT'S ABOUT TO HAPPEN. YOU HAVE GREATLY HELPED ME.
AND NOW, THE TIME HAS COME.
NEW YORK CITY
Energy shot from Nigma's finger and exploded a line of cars.
NIGMA: Beware! His arrival is imminent!
DIRISHB: And who would that be? Santa Claus? Cuz in that case, I think you're a little early.
Nigma turned to see the Avatars standing behind him, ready for battle.
NIGMA: I was told you would come. You will pay for your interference!
The Avatars scattered as Nigma shot a blast of energy at them. Ice was the first to move. He sent a column of ice at Nigma, firmly planting him to the ground. He shouted for TheManWithoutFear to hit him. He began to power up his optic blast, but Nigma turned the ice to vapor and flew at Ice on a silver board. He smashed Ice into a building and began pummeling him. Nigma suddenly felt a tree wrapping around his body.
DIRISHB: Why don't you pick on someone you're own size?
Nigma burst from the branches and spun around.
NIGMA: Trees? I'm severely disappointed.
He blasted DIrishB backwards through the air. Nigma stepped from the building and looked around.
NIGMA: Who's next?
PROJECTX2: Well, this car told me he was quite interested in killing you.
ProjectX2 held a car aloft over his head. Ultimate Gambit touched the car, charging it with kinetic energy. Project threw it at Nigma. It exploded upon impact and shook the ground.
ULTIMATE GAMBIT: Got hi-
The burnt out frame of the car came flying back at Ultimate Gambit from a heap of rubble, pinning him to the ground.
PROJECT: Ultimate Gambit!
ULTIMATE GAMBIT: I'm fine, keep fighting!
PROJECT: Fine, time for Plan B. You ready, Nur?
NURHACHI: Damn straight.
Project picked up Nurhachi and held him over his head. Nurhachi turned his arms into long blades and stretched them out before him. Project aimed towards Nigma, who was floating up from a crater.
PROJECT: Projectile Number 2, comin' up!
Nurhachi flew head first at Nigma. Nigma smacked Nurhachi back with lightning speed and rocketed towards the ground. Project ran at Nigma and grabbed him by the wrists.
PROJECT: ManWithoutFear, where the hell are you!?
MWOF: Just waiting for my cue!
The Man Without Fear pulled himself from a pile of rubble and began blasting Nigma. Nigma was in agony but somehow managed to throw Project forwards at The Man Without Fear.
NIGMA: He is coming, and there's nothing you can do to stop Him!
Nigma shot into the sky, leaving the team in ruins.
PROJECT: Well, that certainly went well.
THE HEADQUARTERS OF THE CABINET:
NEMESES OF THE CABINET AND GENERAL EVILDOERS
Ultimate E thoughtfully stared at the television screen before him.
ULTIMATE E: So that's him, Nigma?
DR.STRANGEFATE: Yes, as far as we can discern.
ULTIMATE E: Well, obviously we'll be recruiting him.
DR.STRANGEFATE: Of course, I'll fetch the others-
ULTIMATE E: No, no. The Avatars will also be aiming for him. We must wait until they attack him. Then, once he has been soured against them, we will recruit him. That's the only intelligent plan, right Doctor?
DR.STRANGEFATE: ...Yes, Sir.
ULTIMATE E: And I've been meaning to tell you something.
DR.STRANGEFATE: What is it, Sir?
ULTIMATE E: Attempts at usurpation never end well.
DR.STRANGEFATE: What?
ULTIMATE E: You know exactly what I'm talking about.
E stared calmly at Dr. Strangefate until an anxious-looking Baxter came running into the room.
BAXTER: Sir, its the computers! There's some sort of transmission coming through. I don't know what it is. Its in some language I've never heard.
SHIHAD: It's Japanese!
Came a voice from the other room.
BAXTER: For the last time, jackass: it isn't Japanese!
ULTIMATE E: I will see for myself. And remember what I told you, Doctor.
Ultimate E left for the computer room.
BAXTER: And what exactly did he tell you?
DR.STRANGEFATE: Shouldn't you be licking E's boots clean or something?
OURCHAIR: Aw snap!
DR.STRANGEFATE: ...
BAXTER: ...
OURCHAIR: ...sorry.
BAXTER: You better start watching your back around here, Strangefate.
DR.STRANGEFATE: Well thanks for your advice. I'll do that.
Baxter glared at Strangefate for a second and stomped out of the room.
DR.STRANGEFATE: Dammit. They're on to us. We're going to lay low for a while. Very low.
Ultimate E sat in front of the computer. The screen was covered in static. Eventually, the vague features of a face could be made out.
ULTIMATE E: I know, I've seen it.
BOOMING VOICE: THEN YOU KNOW WHAT'S ABOUT TO HAPPEN. YOU HAVE GREATLY HELPED ME.
AND NOW, THE TIME HAS COME.
NEW YORK CITY
Energy shot from Nigma's finger and exploded a line of cars.
NIGMA: Beware! His arrival is imminent!
DIRISHB: And who would that be? Santa Claus? Cuz in that case, I think you're a little early.
Nigma turned to see the Avatars standing behind him, ready for battle.
NIGMA: I was told you would come. You will pay for your interference!
The Avatars scattered as Nigma shot a blast of energy at them. Ice was the first to move. He sent a column of ice at Nigma, firmly planting him to the ground. He shouted for TheManWithoutFear to hit him. He began to power up his optic blast, but Nigma turned the ice to vapor and flew at Ice on a silver board. He smashed Ice into a building and began pummeling him. Nigma suddenly felt a tree wrapping around his body.
DIRISHB: Why don't you pick on someone you're own size?
Nigma burst from the branches and spun around.
NIGMA: Trees? I'm severely disappointed.
He blasted DIrishB backwards through the air. Nigma stepped from the building and looked around.
NIGMA: Who's next?
PROJECTX2: Well, this car told me he was quite interested in killing you.
ProjectX2 held a car aloft over his head. Ultimate Gambit touched the car, charging it with kinetic energy. Project threw it at Nigma. It exploded upon impact and shook the ground.
ULTIMATE GAMBIT: Got hi-
The burnt out frame of the car came flying back at Ultimate Gambit from a heap of rubble, pinning him to the ground.
PROJECT: Ultimate Gambit!
ULTIMATE GAMBIT: I'm fine, keep fighting!
PROJECT: Fine, time for Plan B. You ready, Nur?
NURHACHI: Damn straight.
Project picked up Nurhachi and held him over his head. Nurhachi turned his arms into long blades and stretched them out before him. Project aimed towards Nigma, who was floating up from a crater.
PROJECT: Projectile Number 2, comin' up!
Nurhachi flew head first at Nigma. Nigma smacked Nurhachi back with lightning speed and rocketed towards the ground. Project ran at Nigma and grabbed him by the wrists.
PROJECT: ManWithoutFear, where the hell are you!?
MWOF: Just waiting for my cue!
The Man Without Fear pulled himself from a pile of rubble and began blasting Nigma. Nigma was in agony but somehow managed to throw Project forwards at The Man Without Fear.
NIGMA: He is coming, and there's nothing you can do to stop Him!
Nigma shot into the sky, leaving the team in ruins.
PROJECT: Well, that certainly went well.
Bass
Nexus of the World
I don't. I reckon his pc is playing up. Maybe E or a mod can get his e-mail address and send him an e-mail and see what's up? I miss the moonster. It's been almost a week now.
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ACT 3
BACK AT THE ULTIMATE CENTRAL MANSION:
The team teleported itself back into the mansion.
ICEMASTERTRON: I just can't believe how strong that guy......was......
Ice's words fell apart as he looked around. The Mansion had been trashed. Furniture was destroyed, computers had been smashed and the house was in general disarray.
NURHACHI: What the hell happened?!
MWOF: ...Eroz!
They suddenly heard a tired, frail voice from the corner of the room. They rushed to its source: A pile of debris. They pulled back the pieces of random wood and metal to find Eroz, severely beaten and bleeding in several places. His hammer lay just a few feet out of his reach.
ICEMASTERTRON: Oh my god! Eroz, what happened?
EROZ: They came,....I didn't have my hammer....I couldn't stop them....
DIRISHB: Who? The Cabinet?
EROZ: No,....they said they had been sent by....by Him.....
MWOF: Who is "Him"?
EROZ: ...His name.....His name....
MWOF: WHO!? WHO DID THIS TO YOU!?
Before he succumbed to his wounds, Eroz was able to utter six words.
EROZ: ....His name is...
...Bass Lak Tus.
TO BE CONTINUED
BACK AT THE ULTIMATE CENTRAL MANSION:
The team teleported itself back into the mansion.
ICEMASTERTRON: I just can't believe how strong that guy......was......
Ice's words fell apart as he looked around. The Mansion had been trashed. Furniture was destroyed, computers had been smashed and the house was in general disarray.
NURHACHI: What the hell happened?!
MWOF: ...Eroz!
They suddenly heard a tired, frail voice from the corner of the room. They rushed to its source: A pile of debris. They pulled back the pieces of random wood and metal to find Eroz, severely beaten and bleeding in several places. His hammer lay just a few feet out of his reach.
ICEMASTERTRON: Oh my god! Eroz, what happened?
EROZ: They came,....I didn't have my hammer....I couldn't stop them....
DIRISHB: Who? The Cabinet?
EROZ: No,....they said they had been sent by....by Him.....
MWOF: Who is "Him"?
EROZ: ...His name.....His name....
MWOF: WHO!? WHO DID THIS TO YOU!?
Before he succumbed to his wounds, Eroz was able to utter six words.
EROZ: ....His name is...
...Bass Lak Tus.
TO BE CONTINUED
Bass
Nexus of the World
moonmaster said:My computer broke. And I had no other internet access.
What's important (other than you're back and the fanfic I'm about to read) IS THAT I WAS RIGHT! HIS COMPUTER DID BREAK! IN YOUR FACE, ICE!
W00tz0rz!
...
I missed you Mooney. :cry:
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Of course you did. 8)Bass said:
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Yeah, but after I said that you were all like "Oh I guess it must be Lil Kiss then!". You should know better than to trust anything I say. :twisted:slimjim said:
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nice chapter Moon I like the plot... and I'm curious to see as to Bass Lak Tus coming..... I'm guessing he is way more powerful than E. I'm a good guy now
thee great one
Master of TOG-fu.
Bass Lak Tus
Bloody Brillant. Easily the best issue yet. I hope you use me and good to.
Bloody Brillant. Easily the best issue yet. I hope you use me and good to.
Bass
Nexus of the World
I really was enjoying this issue. It had a great Matrix pisstake. It certainly did not disappoint.
AND IT'S ABOUT ****ING TIME I DEBUTED! I'M THE REASON THIS SITE WAS MADE! (Ultimate E's words... really. Go check it out.) YOU'RE ALL IN TROUBLE NOW.
DUE TO MY AMAZING DEBUT, I HAVE CHANGED MY AVATAR TO THE MOST FEARSOME IMAGE OF MY PERSONAGE I COULD FIND.
PREPARE THYSELF.
FEAR ME.
AND IT'S ABOUT ****ING TIME I DEBUTED! I'M THE REASON THIS SITE WAS MADE! (Ultimate E's words... really. Go check it out.) YOU'RE ALL IN TROUBLE NOW.
DUE TO MY AMAZING DEBUT, I HAVE CHANGED MY AVATAR TO THE MOST FEARSOME IMAGE OF MY PERSONAGE I COULD FIND.
PREPARE THYSELF.
FEAR ME.
Ice
Teh Sexy Monkey Queen
Uh, what did I do?Bass said:
