I can't remember if I've said this yet, but I agree with what Bass said (and I don't remember his exact words) - but here is this extinction-level event and what do we start with? Two chicks fighting. With guns.
What?! The first 5 pages should be of everyone on Earth literally ****ting their pants, looking at this thing in awe as they realize that they are quite certainly going to die (which of course won't happen, but they don't know that).
What?! The first 5 pages should be of everyone on Earth literally ****ting their pants, looking at this thing in awe as they realize that they are quite certainly going to die (which of course won't happen, but they don't know that).